"Eeeerk!" My car skids across the lanes. Horrific thoughts begin to fill my mind. It was just one mistake. And if I hurt somebody, my life would never be the same. We had just had a strife. I overreact and storm out, hop in the car, and my mind was so far away I couldn't even pay attention. I can hear the sirens approaching, pulling me over to figure out what I've done.
Officer Brown informs me that everybody is fine. Well not everybody. I on the other hand now have to go to court. I was indicted under a DUI charge. At least thats what my mistake was deemed. Though, I was completely sober. But that didn't matter. I could have seriously injured someone. It was time to pay for my mistake.
I like your use of onomatopoeia and vivid imagery. I also liked your story line.
ReplyDeleteThe story is really cute and you correctly used all of the vocab words. I also liked how you used different literary elements.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy how well these vocabulary words are blended in and how welly righted this post is.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy how well these vocabulary words are blended in and how welly written this post is.
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