"Grrr." My stomach
rumbles. I hadn't
eaten for ten
years. Or at least
it felt that way. I
was as hungry as
an elephant. And I
felt as if i could eat
one too. I could already feel
the sun shining brighter as I
took another step into the kitchen.
Onomatopeia, caesura, simile and H=hyperbole
This is a great poem on the struggles of being hungry. Great post!
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you described what it is like to be hungry in this poem, and I think that your layout really adds to it in a good way!
ReplyDeleteI like the sounds you showed. I also like the similes you used!
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