We could all hear the roar of the boat's engine as it went even faster. All of us were tightly gripping the handles of the tube with big smiles on our faces. Me and three of my other friends were at tubing at one of the friend's lake house. Her dad drove the boat that was pulling all of us. The sounds of laughter echoed and the sun shined brightly. We had all found a way to have fun in the summer heat.
Slap. The sound of my life jacket hitting the water as the boat makes its lap, so I can climb back on. We make more laps, the boat making its sharp turns and endless circles in attempt to throw us off. We did this for three days until we couldn't hold on anymore. This experience has taught me to have fun no matter what.
I liked the amount of details you put in the story. And the transition to the next paragraph was good.
ReplyDeleteWow, seems fun and I felt like I was there!! I like all of the vivid details you used and there was a lot of imagery.
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